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Fun with the Apples

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All the apples havin a good old time. :D
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Hello, perhaps needed a little more practice the bodies and proportions. Big Macintosh is not too well provided, could have seen some pictures and make a sketch.

The way in which looks AppleJack is beautiful, her proportions are better calculated, could perhaps have added more clearly instead of darkness in your hair.

The Granny Smith needs a slightly larger neck and some wrinkles, hair perhaps could do better.

AppleBloom has an expression very tender, it would be better idea to have used a pink darker instead of black for the background of his mouth, his nose is slightly larger than it should be. And the tie of his head looks a bit separate, perhaps a little more together would be better.

And finally, Pinkie Pie, has an expression an uncomfortable, do not you think? I think that one of his eyes looks a little bigger that the other, repeat it from the bottom of the mouth with foot with Bloom, the Pinkie hair looks a bit weird, but I like a lot.

The cart also has been somewhat rare, as it seems that It does not it with the position of Big Macintosh, as if it were not in fact linked with cart

Continue practicing!

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Commented on behalf of ProjectComment Kao Emoji-20 (Content) [V1] 
I'm not very sure of that throughout this well written since I don't speak English, I did my best. Kao Emoji-77 (Errr) [V4]